Sunday, September 27, 2009

Rough Draft.

It's 8:10 a.m and im presenting my rough draft of a formal e-mail to my group ¨THE ALL STARS¨ and to be honest comparing my e-mail with theirs mine seems to be a little short (ok way short!) so i hope i can get as much help possible as i can out of my team members.



5:30 p.m , well jus as i expected , the activity during was class was really helpfull and the recomendations that i got from my team partners will really help me to write a better paper .sometimes is hard to tell if you are doing things the right way, but having someone telling you or helping you in certain way can really make the dirference wen you get the final product.

But even though you do something and finish it and you think theres nothing else you can add to this thing, at least wen youre writtin a paper think of this (this is what my english teacher told us during class) "a paper can always be improved and hearing other views and comments are always a good thing."

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